Lots of work on CH 6

sections/3-the-castle-with-the-steel-door.md

@@ -4130,30 +4130,31 @@ Assuming the PCs agree, Tymora offers a boon:
 > bring her in front of Green so that she could negotiate
 > for the deck.  You did exactly as I asked.  I asked you
 > to strengthen your telepathic bond to this God, so that I
-> could see it.  Again, you did exactly as I asked.  In
-> addition to your faithful service, you also seek to
+> could see it.  Again, you did exactly as I asked.
+>
+> In addition to doing as I requested, you also worked to
 > preserve peace.  I believe this deserves a boon. As a
 > party, I would like to to make a collective request - one
 > boon for all.”
 
-One boon that the PCs might ask for is a boon of luck - after all, this
-is a goddess of luck. If the PCs ask for this, they all get the “lucky”
-feat, which grants advantage 3x day on almost any die roll.
+One boon that the PCs might ask for is a boon of luck -
+after all, this is a goddess of luck. If the PCs ask for
+this, they all get the “lucky” feat, which grants advantage
+3x day on almost any die roll.
 
-Another boon they may ask for is the destruction of the Museum of
-Orethys. If the PCs ask for it, Tymora says she does not have the power
-to destroy the Museum itself, but she says she *can* free everyone
-inside. She snaps her fingers, and then she says, “The prisoners have
-been sent to my domain. My priests will help them to find new homes.”
+If the PCs ask for something that isn't so squarely in
+Tymora's wheelhouse, they get a boon which is less powerful.
+It is wise to ask a goddess for the thing she's particularly
+good at!
 
-If the PCs ask why she can’t destroy the museum itself, Tymora explains:
-“The Museum represents an ideology: that ordinary people exist for the
-amusement of rich and powerful men. That ideology has many followers, it
-has power. So therefore, the Museum has power. It is empty now, but it
-will fill again.”
+Another boon they may ask for is the destruction of the
+Museum of Orethys. If the PCs ask for it, Tymora says that
+this would be quite difficult.  She says: "If you solve this
+Deck problem for me, I will attempt this."  For now, the
+PCs will have to choose a smaller boon.
 
-Selune also has a boon for the PCs: all members of the party can now
-cast the “Selune’s Light” cantrip. This differs from a regular light
-cantrip in that it lasts 8 hours, is a little brighter, and looks like
-moonlight.
+Selune also has a boon for the PCs: all members of the party
+can now cast the “Selune’s Light” cantrip at will.  This
+differs from a regular light cantrip in that it lasts 8
+hours, covers a little more area, and looks like moonlight.